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This week Ive been working on some t shirt mockups for my mates pop punk band 'down to my last'

There hoping to get some shirts printed towards end of april so Ive got a while to work on these and hopefully I can somehow tie it in with my FMP 

There pretty happy with these but I know theyve got a long way to go so some crit would be good from everyone! 

If you click them they should go big, 

I want to get the type all sorted but its a pain as i draw it all by hand first then go round it with the pen tool

thanks for any feedback!